IELTS Insights – Writing- Post 10 – Bài viết đã đạt 7.0 của học viên cho đề Writing Task 2 ngày 11/ 01/ 2020

Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Phân tích nhanh tại sao bài viết này được 7.0 ?
• Grammar chính xác, hầu như không có lỗi sai. Câu văn rõ ràng không có câu nào khó hiểu. Văn phong đơn giản nhưng nêu rõ và chứng minh tốt quan điểm cá nhân. Không quá phô trương bằng những cấu trúc ‘khủng’.

• Dù còn vài từ, đặc biệt là trạng từ chưa được tự nhiên. Phần lớn từ vựng đều được dùng chính xác. Từ vựng đơn giản đến lạ vừa phải, nhưng đảm bảo tính tự nhiên. Không cần những từ ‘khủng’ hay ‘hoa mỹ’ khiến cho người đọc cảm thấy ngôn ngữ bài viết kỳ lạ.

Kết luận ngắn gọn, các bạn mong muốn 6.5+ thì nên luyện tập cho mình 2 yếu tố trên. Như cựu giám khảo Simon đã nói, có những bài viết nhìn đơn giản. Tuy nhiên, không đơn giản để viết được.

Thầy cảm ơn Trần Bá Đạt đã cung cấp bài viết này. Hy vọng bài viết cho các bạn khác cái nhìn chính xác hơn về IELTS Writing nói riêng. Chúc các em luyện tập hiệu quả nhé!

August 2, 2020

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