IELTS Insights – Writing- Post 4 – Bài viết mẫu đề Writing Task 2 ngày 13/ 10/ 2018

BÀI MẪU CHO ĐỀ IELTS WRITING TASK 2 NGÀY 13/ 10/ 2018

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

• Thầy viết bài mẫu này là vì một vài học viên thiếu ý tưởng cho bài viết này.

• Bài viết trong khoảng 45 phút, vẫn theo cách viết đơn giản, ngắn gọn, nhưng hiệu quả.

• Bài viết band 8.0. Điểm, và nhận xét bài viết được đưa ra hoàn toàn bởi Giám khảo chứ không từ người viết. Và, thầy để lại nguyên comments của Giám khảo luôn dù tốt hay xấu để em xem nhé!

• Khi xem bài, có thể em sẽ thấy giám khảo chấm khó. Tuy nhiên, khi chấm các bài viết của thầy, giám khảo đã đề nghị ‘bắt bẻ’ (picky) nhất có thể. Múc đích là để mỗi bài sửa thầy nhận được có giá trị hơn và thầy đã đồng ý.

* Vấn đề trong bài này là Giám khảo này khá nghiêm khắc với tiêu chí Cohesion and Coherence. Ông luôn cảm nhận rằng các ideas cần phải thuyết phục hơn.

Do có khá nhiều thứ để xem trong mỗi bài. Thầy đã liệt kê từ tiêu chí Vocabulary đến Task Response và Cohesion and Coherence. Thầy khuyên em nên đọc kỹ và phân tích. Nếu em không đọc hết được các bài này ngay thì share các bài về để đọc lại dần nhé!

Chúc các em học tốt! 


October 16, 2018

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